Comments : Afraid

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    It always amazes me how writing down how we feel helps. It helps release our emotions, let off the steam that can sometimes become too much.

    Keep writing.

    Take care,

    Michael

    • 8 years ago

      by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX

      Thank you Michael that means a lot I've been going through some difficult times at the moment that's kinda how I feel so thought I better write it down to maybe make myself feel better :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    As Michael says, writing really can help in these cases; I've written a few of these myself! The trick is to know that tomorrow will often be brighter.
    I like this poem - it is has an honesty about it that too many don't, in my opinion.
    Take care of yourself,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    *double post!

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Writing our feelings can help alot and makes a good piece. This is nice and short but works well with what your are trying to do do..
    All I would suggest is in the last line 'an' should be 'and'