Have you ever had a day

by Tammi   Jan 19, 2016


Have you ever had a day
When no matter what you do or say
It's just not enough

Have you ever had a day
When all you do is think of
What might or could have been

Have you ever had a day
When all you want to is cry
Scream and shout just to try to feel better

Have you ever had a day
When you want to throw up your
Hands an just want it all to end

Have you ever had a day
When all you want to do is hold
The ones who have gone on to a better place

Have you ever had a day
When you just want to say
F@ck it and just walk awayl

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  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Aww a hard hitting piece...actually many can relate to this. . honestly I have that days too. .so Am I welcome to the club?

    well done to this

    Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Yes, yes, yes unfortunately. I thought it was just my bad luck but obviously not.

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I can honestly say, I have had all those days; sometimes, all rolled into one!

    Have a better one.

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Dragon Boy

    Ive had that day almost everyday...
    very well written..

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Tammi,

    The answer to your question is a resounding YES! I have had quite a few of those days.

    I love the penultimate stanza in this piece; that really is effective. People we miss and wish we could hold again - especially on 'those' days. But remember - they are in a better place, so maybe we should not wish it on them!

    Well done and all the very best,
    Ben

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