Comments : One that flew away

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Busy,
    A moving piece here about letting the love of your life go but wanting them to move on and be happy despite your own heartbreak.
    True love means sacrifice, and this certainly strikes me as that.

    Lovely write and take care,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Hiro

    There is more to a poem than the heart. Find within others a quiet place, where love is absolute, and unwavering.