A revealed surprise...(senyru)

by Mr. Darcy   Jan 22, 2016


Eager excitement
as I receive a letter:
A Fixed Penalty

michael
2016

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Ow how sad, Michael. I had maybe two of them in all the years I have driven a car, but it so stings to get them. A good thing you can vent it in a poem!

    Well done,

    (((hugs))) xx

  • 8 years ago

    by Hellon

    I wonder what you've done to receive a fine Michael...glad you can still feel humour in parting with your cash :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Hello Hellon,

      I think they call it satire! lol I have to fork out £100 and will have 3 points added to my driving license. Damn, darn and blast!! :O(

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    It is 12.30 in the morning, I am shattered and have a stomach ache BUT...I am laughing my miserable head off, Michael; this is brilliant. I could go on about the title being the sneaky fourth line, the tension built and then the BAM moment, but I am fully aware that they are all the things you taught me about senryu!

    This is wonderful and thanks for making a sickly man laugh in the dead of night!

    Ben

    Ps. I've had a few of those dastardly letters myself...

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