by Everlasting Jan 24, 2016
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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Oh moon, full with pride, |
by Meena Krish
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Reading this gave me a picture of a celestial being..who goes wherever she feels. I also like how you have used the word strolling-it gives it a magical atmosphere as well as character and at the same time leaves the reader wondering...nicely penned. |
by Cindy
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Lucero |
by Everlasting
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Thank you Ben and Cindy |
by Ben Pickard
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Hi Lucero, |
by Mr. Darcy
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Hello, |
by Everlasting
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Thanks for liking my haiku and for the thought provoking comment about the sun |