What a very sad piece. This really brings tears to the readers eyes.
Take care
Cindy

I like this poem, I might not be able to comment anymore like I used to but I can tell you this poem is very emotional, it caught my heart, and it was visual too.

My favorite stanza in the entire poem was probably the last one since it seems to wrap the title up and tie it with a big bow with beauty all over.

This poem was beautiful like all your work my dear! 5/5

- Mori