Comments : Just Love

  • 8 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Clever shape poem, Michael.
    Subtle double-entendres: veins, spirits

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Michael
    As Larry says, this is a clever piece. I too liked the "searched in veins".
    The shape is visually appealing and as a whole it is a nicely written piece.
    Take care and all the best,
    Ben