Hello Noor,

Lovely to see you writing again. Here we have a piece of revelry. The intense love, the physical love and the metaphoric love.
I like how all the above is as fragile, as brief as a blink.

Well done.

Michael x

What a beautiful love poem.
Take care
Cindy

A beautiful Love poem Noor, on the often fragility of Love. Many of us have had that sad experience, which you have described very well in your words.
Well penned!

Hello Noor,

As Michael says, lovely to see a new poem from you, although I understand that life gets in the way sometimes.
You have summed up the beauty and the tragedy of love wonderfully here which isn't easy in a small piece.
All the best,
ben

Beautiful poem Noor,

I see all the beauty of it in these words:

Opened myself to you
Like a flower in a vase

A moment when the love of a lover is appreciated and answered by his beloved one....

Noor,

Loves ups and downs summed up nicely in one beautiful piece

Em