Another little gem. I like how you urge attention from the start. There is something immediate and real about a request of 'quiet' its the instant image of finger against pursed lips, together with the associated sound. I like it!
The scene is still, people waiting for: dusk to be replaced with light. Light from a spread if stars and from a bonfire. The image you set is wonderful. Excitement and fun as the inspiration of the night becomes the stories of tomorrow.