Comments : Ghost

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Noor,

    A sad poem with what I found to be a very chilling and moving end.
    Take care and all the best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Noor,

    as ben says, this is a very chilling write, especially the 'doll' reference. It comes across that there is an abuse of power causing a feeling of worthlessness, being something less than human, unmoving, inanimate, doll like.

    I hope you are okay Noor.

    Take care ((hugs))

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Noor,

    This is a very moving, emotional write.

    Em