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by Fate Chan Feb 6, 2016 category : Life, society / about society
Flimsy shoe stroke from below I'd certainly had skipped its blow And the name granny'd called When proudly he strode past the road Save the suffocating pain a random pointy thing Bestowed Unto a strange realm remarkably close Faceless creatures moving along Straight and flat they stared precious lives so tightly held O shiny little screens master hypnotists at hand unaware when and where I am
by Greeter
Now this one made me feel confused lol I enjoyed the read though. The poem has a rhythm. As I was reading the poem I felt like I was being squashed by a shoe then that I avoided it but then I dk... It must have been like the ending I didn't know where or when I am... Pun not intended. Keep writing