Comments : And you're gone..

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello and welcome to the site.

    As I read this, I could almost feel the sarcasm building; the bitter taste that has clearly been left in your mouth and then the last lines confirm it:
    "you made the perfect move by leaving. Bravo"

    This poem positively seethes in hurt and anger.

    All the very best and keep writing,
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by throughmyeyes

      Thank you so much ben for your warm welcome
      and mostly for stopping by. Your words meant a lot to me! This peom clearly states anger and hurt and I did sure add some scarasem in the end.
      Feelings are just all over the place which pretty sucks!

      I hope you're doing well
      xox

  • 8 years ago

    by Greeter

    Welcome to poems and quotes

    The sarcasm becomes more evident towards the end of the letter. Though the first half is filled with sadness and I can't help but feel disappointment and at the same time a bit of sincerity. That perhaps, putting distance may have been the best to do.

    Hope you are doing well.

    Keep writing

    • 8 years ago

      by throughmyeyes

      Thank you greeter for your lovely comment and for stopping by. Being left and put down is just the worst thing can ever happen to someone!
      You surely got my spirit up high and made my day.
      Cheers.
      xox

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    There's no better way for someone to say they care than kicking you when you are down by leaving..
    Well written with such raw, powerful emotion.