Hello Saffie,

I am writing this with bright red stinging cheeks.

The title made me feel an 'Amy Winehouse' feel, a 'back to black' thing...

The introduction made me nod my head with empathy. People who you thought were friends, fade away and reveal an empty dark hole of regret and puzzlement.

The last verse though was genius, a hard slap in the face. A sarcastic 'thank you' for crapping on my lawn!

Excellent and point well laid out.

Take care,

Michael