Comments : 25/01/2016

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Hazel

    "Only when the eyes are dead do you understand the books you never read"

    That is actually a wonderful line!

    The poem reads almost like an ode to the eyes and is full of truth and philosophy.
    Well done, well written and all the best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Sushmita Mitra Chetri

    That's a nice one

    • 8 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thank you very much Eonex. And welcome to the family

  • 8 years ago

    by nancy

    Just loved it.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Woe. I love this. I can imagine for some reason being outside of myself after dying because of some of these lines.
    You write really well.
    My favourite line is..
    'only when the eye are dead do you understand the books you never read' :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thank you so much for all your lovely comments em so greatly appreciated, always good to have positive feedback to reinspire your creative energies. Namaste.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Woe. I love this. I can imagine for some reason being outside of myself after dying because of some of these lines.
    You write really well.
    My favourite line is..
    'only when the eye are dead do you understand the books you never read' :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Anesu Joseph Chihambakwe

    But if you could only see the power hidden with you, wow! A revelation.
    Wonderful peace