Comments : My Dearest

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Hi I did enjoy reading this as its uplifting and shows your undying love for this person.
    The only thing I suggest is writing because fully instead of bec. Also, there is an error on fogot - forgot.

    I feel that this would read better if it was separated a little too, remember though only my opinion.

    E.g.

    "So now, I miss you not because you miss me but because you taught me how to feel the emptiness when you're not here.
    I love you not because you love me but because you taught everything I never thought existed before.
    I'm not supposed to love knowing my inadequacies.
    I'm not suppose to care knowing it will never be enough but I love you anyway and

    I will love you forever."

    All in all, great write.

    Em