All the best, it's taking me longer than I thought to stay awake. I think anyone can do it.

Welcome to poems and quotes. I enjoyed reading this piece. It's more prose than verse, however, it's creative and full of imagery. Not only that, it tells a story. I can't fully relate to it, but I can feel part of the story as I read it.

Keep writing.

All the best, it's taking me longer than I thought to stay awake. I think anyone can do it.

Welcome to poems and quotes. I enjoyed reading this piece. It's more prose than verse, however, it's creative and full of imagery. Not only that, it tells a story. I can't fully relate to it, but I can feel part of the story as I read it.

Keep writing.

All the best, it's taking me longer than I thought to stay awake. I think anyone can do it.

Welcome to poems and quotes. I enjoyed reading this piece. It's more prose than verse, however, it's creative and full of imagery. Not only that, it tells a story. I can't fully relate to it, but I can feel part of the story as I read it.

Keep writing.

All the best.

Welcome to poems and quotes. I enjoyed reading this piece. It's more prose than verse, however, it's creative and full of imagery. Not only that, it tells a story. I can't fully relate to it, but I can feel part of the story as I read it.

Keep writing.

I love the wording and journey you've told here. I would suggest maybe punctuation here and there, but I still enjoyed reading this.

Hopefully we get to see more!

The actually insight to the poem,is quite good. I enjoyed hope you still hold on with hope.
Well written and intriguing.