Life Like Light

by DarkLight   Feb 13, 2016


Life,
Precious as it might be
struggle is made
Survival for the fittest
.

Like,
Stray animals
out in search for food
Only the strongest will survive.

Light,
Path of righteousness
made for the right ones
to empty them of their worries.

    report violation
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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This has a great little structure; I love how you have started each stanza with a word from the title. It makes them compact and drives your point home well because of it.

    The only suggestion is on the last line. "To empty them OF their worries" not "OFF their worries."

    Great write and all the very best,
    ben

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