My Universe
by Brenda Feb 14, 2016
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I have traveled |
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7 years agoby Lucifer
You are my only reason
I would brave
being burned
by the sun,
charring my wings,
sending me plummeting
into the depths
of the sea.
Love makes you do incredible things!
Very beautiful poem, Brenda!-
7 years ago
by Brenda
L, thank you so much. He is my everything and I would do anything for him.
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8 years ago
by Brenda
Thank you all! Yes, Brenda is very happy. I never thought I would ever find that one person who makes me so very happy. He is my universe and I would travel space and time again and again to be by his side. Thank you all again! I don't think you will ever know how much your comments really mean to me-hugs-
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8 years ago
by Em
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8 years ago
by Em
What a beautiful piece.
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8 years ago
by Ben Pickard
Brenda,
I can't believe that I missed this one. It's a stunning write. There's almost a marvellous, uncontrolled free-falling-into-love feel to this piece as you near the end, made possible by your wonderful layout.
If we can find that 'constant' in a world that shifts and spins around us; if we know that there is always that someone that is not only going through it with us but supporting us too, then we are very lucky indeed.
A wonderful poem, Brenda.
Ben
