by Michael Feb 14, 2016
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
The news today, |
by mossgirl19
You have great talent in expressing your emotions, Michael. This is beautifully rhymed even with a sad theme. |
by Em
Michael, the rhythm in this piece is really smooth and makes it all the more readable. |
Love sometimes is so strong it hurts especially when it's lost. It takes time to heal but there is greater love coming. Enjoyed reading. Great write. |
by Michael
Thank you, I feel feedback is so valuable, and new to the on line poetry club. Its great to express your emotions poetically, as their are no rules, only respect and respecting. |
by Mr. Darcy
Hello Michael, |
by Michael
Thank you, that's nice feedback. I started writing about 2 years ago, and what I love about poetry is that you write how you feel with emotion |