Comments : Taxi Saturday

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Michael and welcome to the site.

    What a wonderful poem about the trials and tribulations of driving a taxi on a Saturday night! I particularly like the way you mention the first customers being polite but as the hours wear on they become more drunk and ......less so!
    Great, unforced rhyme and a lovely flow. Well done. I am nominating this for the weekly contest.
    All the very best,
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Ben, that's really nice feedback and to be nominated.

      I guess it helps actually being a Taxi driver, but showing the expression to people is great

      Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Really enjoyed this very quirky rendition of the night as a Taxi driver. Loved the Rhyming and choice of words

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Michael, what a uniqely executed piece. I loved the rhyming and how you described a taxi driver.. Is this by experience?
    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Hi Em, just to say thank you so much for all your comments on my poetry. It is so nice to hear your feedback with depth and emotion😊. Yes by trade I am a cab driver x

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Another WOW for capturing the scenes encountered in your tax-driving...great detailed descriptions and humorous story-telling. Loved this so much. :-)