by HumanInATree Feb 17, 2016
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Time eludes me as the sand piles up. |
by Liz
There's something about this......not sure what it is, but I like it a lot. Makes me sad, but hopeful. |
by HumanInATree
Thank you I missed those few errors "bye" and "grand" when I published it. On the other hand I kind of like the via a glass part ill think about changing it or write a part two. Nevertheless thank you for the complements and I feel the same way about this pome. It sits with me in an uncanny way but I still see its power. |