Comments : What the heck?

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Brenda: One small typo I feel in the middle upper part of your poem "alike should be like" I think?
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    Now on with this powerful piece-

    To have another bend you to the point of explosion can be heartbreaking, but what you have done here is elegantly displayed your emotions, so much that I could feel your sadness and frustration through out... Oh I am loving your pen dear Lady! this was explosive!

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you! You are right too about the typo-crud, missed that...should be "like". Yeah, love can be the cruelest but I couldn't survive without it.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Brenda, this needs more views and those sons of guns need to answer.. Why they feel it ok to shatter life's and then move on without a care in the world!!

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much Em. This was written for a dear friend of mine whose husband hit her with that bomb, literary told her for her own good. What a douche!

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Brenda,
    I must say, Im loving the creativity you are exploring with your writes. :) They seem to always turn out so lovely!

    Well done on this powerful piece!
    it had everything, sadness, rawness, and more.

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Naomi! It's hard not to be affected by things that happen around us. Hugs!