Hi Lexilove,
welcome to poems & quotes.
Really sad poem. I can feel the anger and pain in it.
Nice. Keep writing.
~S

Thanks

Nice write. ur anger was very well expressed and yeh wkcum to p and q.

^ she means 'wlcum' (welcome).
And hey, how did it get so less ratings. It certainly deserves more.

Hello

Wow. This is dark and emotional and honestly expressed - especially for you young age. The end really is shocking. I am aware, however, how it can feel in this scenario.

Well done.

Ben

This is a great piece. Full of emotion.. Lost love or grievance?

Take care, Em

It's a good write.
But the ending is indeed harsh.