Hello Hellon,

Like a complex timepiece this poem is perfectly presise.

Take care,

Michael

Beautifully done Hellon,

Take care Em

Judge Comments:

Hellon nails this form, just a splendid poem by Hellon this week!

I have true adoration for this poem, it takes you to a place of possible rice fields, working your fingers to the bone, for pennies I'm sure, just to make wantons.. I may be way off but I do see this visually in my head.... Hellon's poetry makes you think and that is what adds such beauty to this poem! well done!!