Comments : A Yearning

  • 8 years ago

    by DarkLight

    You get better with every poem you write.
    This one really consumed my knowledge of art as I read it.
    The way you wrote it makes it attractive calling to be read.

    I like the last stanza.

    "At last we will take the heat of sun
    in open sky,
    manipulate the wind metaphorically
    and sleep in our bodies."

    Nicely done.
    All the best.
    Shanky