Comments : Desire

  • 6 years ago

    by Victoria Ramey


    "Feed my crimson fixation
    Imprint me with your incisions of possession
    Be the brush and make me the canvas
    Forage and mollify your deprivation"

    You are a very vivid writer. I love this piece. I enjoy the complexity of expelling human desire and making it poetic.

    • 6 years ago

      by DarkNDangerous

      Thank you so much! I love when the reader sees and feels things they were not expecting to. Books are visual and I think making poetry the same is a beautiful thing.