Mother!!!

by Syed   Mar 12, 2016


Mother if you were with me,
I would have held you tight

I am nothing but a lonely wanderer
without you I can not feel right,

You were my life, my soul, my guide
How can I have any insight?

I still remember your unfailing care & love
Right from morning till night

You did everything to comfort me
if I ever cried

No one can be what you were to me
How can any one else stand-in with you

Mother! What if you come back to me?
Oh! God why mothers are not immortal

From heaven, you still love me
I just wanna tell, how much I love you

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Oh my goodness.

    Nobody should have to lose their Mum. They should definitely be immortal :(

    Sad but wonderful poem.

    The only criticism I would have is that in stanza 1

    'Mother if you were with me,
    I would have hold you tight'

    I would write 'held' instead of 'hold' as it makes more sense. :)

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