Great poem, Chris. I loved the flow and feel of it. Very sweet and loving.

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Great poem, I am speechless to what to write to it. It's definetely from the heart, very sweet.

Heart-felt poem. Nicely written. Well done!
Take care always,

;;^^Kalah

wow, I liked this poem too. It was short but sweet, and your girl must be very proud of you! i especially liked the flow of the poem. keep on writing,
SatuzKa

very sweet.

I liked this line : "eternity is a step away,"

Emotionally, it was good - It seems to hold a lot of modest, but true feeling.

However, I think in terms of "poetry", the rhyming is a bit predictable, and it would help had you developed your stanzas a bit more, adding some vividness and detail to this description of your love. But the poem itself is from the heart... and overall it was a decent write, good job.

Great poem! It seems to have a lot of meaning and feeling to it, and not just words on a computer screen. Keep up the good work!
~Good Luck!~
-Kate

nice flow

i liked this poem altho i thought the rhythm was a little awkward. i think it needs few more words in each line to make it flow better altho really liked the meaning. i got this off o the forum so bumping it bk up worKed! hope u return the favour
xxxTake care! LoU xxx

U can tell it came from the heart another exellent poem! Keep posting! Take Care! Brooke

awwww wow, ur really good. i luv short but sweet ones. mine r all depressing compared to urs haha. i got like 1 happy one, yewww go dani! haha keep it up chris!!
luv dani
xoxoxo

Hey, wow, amazing poem. Your really talented! I wish I could write like that ;P. Anyway Amazing job. Check out mine, I'd like to see what you think. Thanks and again good job! -[Natalie*]-

Hey, wow, amazing poem. Your really talented! I wish I could write like that ;P. Anyway Amazing job. Check out mine, I'd like to see what you think. Thanks and again good job! -[Natalie*]-

Beautiful. that was sweet.

And of course i love this poem.. the flow is perfect and so is the rhyming... great job!!!

This poem was okay, once again, however, I feel like I've read it a million times before. It's not a bad poem, it's just been done before.

Amazing! so great!