by Larry Chamberlin Mar 16, 2016
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Unquenched fire under a deluge; |
by Darren
Judges comment 2 |
by Darren
Judges comment |
Really like the imagery and in particular the lines: desire leads to conflagration, |
by Em
The description you use is so captivating and flawless it helps the poem run smoothly. |
by Darren
Why bother with one form when you can mash a few together, (or at least move from one to another) |
Darren, I am honored you like the form. Personally I agree about the transition line - we should come up with a connector-form and dub it segue. |