by Mayday
I like this! It's graceful. It's easy to relate to, as the ending mentioned - beautiful metaphors, lovely work! |
I loved this part in particular |
by Meena Krish
A picture of a beautiful rose with a soft heart yet a sharp surface surrounds it to always bring back those who touch it to reality. I really like the descriptions and the read itself touched me...lovely write dear. |
by Brenda
So very pretty, beautiful descriptive of sorrow. We think our faces aren't so pretty when we are in the middle of a good cry but your poem tells us more. |
by Naughtymouse
Holy crap! |
by Everlasting
Thank you Ben |