There's a time

by AngelaLuisaCory   Mar 18, 2016


There's a time for moving forward
And leaving pain behind,
There's a time for clouds to gather
And for winter sun to shine

If you cannot leave the yearning
For what may, or may not have been,
Forever cloaked in darkness
And never more to dream

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Very inspirational poem and never truer words spoken

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Mother!

    Oh, I have waited many a year to critique my own mum....

    To be honest, I don't really have much advice to offer this lovely little poem.
    All I might suggest is this:

    "for what may or may not be"

    You keep the rhyme with "dream" but drop a syllable and I think that might flow a little better - up to you.

    I dare not give this anything but 5!

    Love Ben

    Edit - it wouldn't make as much sense, then, granted.....

    • 8 years ago

      by AngelaLuisaCory

      Thank you for your comment on my poem dear son! It took me a while to become a member of this site, but there are some amazing pieces of work here, and I'm really glad I joined

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Love this poem short but sweet and inspirational

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