Love this poem short but sweet and inspirational

Hello Mother!

Oh, I have waited many a year to critique my own mum....

To be honest, I don't really have much advice to offer this lovely little poem.
All I might suggest is this:

"for what may or may not be"

You keep the rhyme with "dream" but drop a syllable and I think that might flow a little better - up to you.

I dare not give this anything but 5!

Love Ben

Edit - it wouldn't make as much sense, then, granted.....

Very inspirational poem and never truer words spoken