Comments : Medusa

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Really enjoyed reading this one.

  • 8 years ago

    by Darren

    Love this,

    short snappy lines with plenty of images conjured.

    The rhyme works well and helps the flow.

    I just love the second to last line, very clever.

    great piece.

    Hopefully someone will nominate this as I am out of nominations.

    • 8 years ago

      by AngelaLuisaCory

      Dear Darren

      Thank you so much for your kind comments - so pleased you liked it - am new on this site, so it means a lot

      Regards

      Angie