usually I welcome new members, but from your profile you have been a member before. Anyhow, welcome back, nice to see you posting a new poem...
The title intrigued me at first, I though a tribute to God, or an actual King. As I read through the gushing tribute, I discovered it is for a man who lives far away. This distance creates emotions to become concentrated, powerful, all consuming. This is clear from your writing.
I wish you both all the best for the future.
Keep writing Heather,
Michael
8 years ago
by Ben Pickard
Hello Heather
Nice to read a poem about such a passionate and complete love on the site. It really does come across as all consuming, as Mr Darcy remarks.
"see there's a place in me where your fingerprints still rest"
^^^^^^^
I love that line.
Well done and all the best,
Ben
8 years ago
by Em
Heather,
Such a deep in-depth love to the one you love. Powerful and emotional.