Ken - this could almost be a rap! A story told with constant internal rhyme throughout.

"He is the one that keeps our atoms side by side so you will not fall apart but abide"

^^^^

Clever and comical, Ken

Take care,
Ben

Thanks Ben!

We can't fool the man above and that is for sure.
You did an awesome job here Ken. Be blessed.

Ken,

Good rhythm which keeps the piece flowing smooth throughout.
A good story too. We cannot fool the big man.

Em