Comments : Bumblebee love

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    this is so sweet. Pet names are endearments that lovers often use. Your open use of them in a poem is a clear dedication of your love for 'bumblebee'
    The chosen insect is worthy of note too. A creature whose life is full of purpose and their impact is felt and seen the world over. Without our bumblebees and butterflies we would be dull, Our nature tables would be dusty brown, like our lives without colour. Your 'Bumblebee' gifts you colour and in return you will share love and gift the world colour for evermore.

    Best wishes to you both.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What an original and lovely poem from you Hazel. Take care.
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thank you very much Ben, as always it is an honor to have one of the greatest poets in the group pay such acute attention to my works. Take care dear friend

  • 8 years ago

    by okkert

    Beautiful poem. You are amazing with words and are so talented.

    • 8 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thank you my baby :) you're such a special man. I love you my bumblebee

  • 8 years ago

    by DarkLight

    I will hand to you, your piece is full. with emotions and love.

    All the best Hazel.

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    What a beautiful portrayal of love. A glimpse into a special wonderful part of your life. To have such love transcends eternity.
    Best wishes Milly x

    • 8 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      AW thank you so much Milly, thanks for taking the time to read and leave a comment, it's greatly appreciated.

      Take care * HAZEL

  • 8 years ago

    by Anesu Joseph Chihambakwe

    Lovely peace