by Mr. Darcy
Hello Brenda, |
by Brenda
Michael, thank you so much! It was written with a bit of humor, you almost have to while you are getting kicked in the shins. You definitely called it right, love isn't always about the good times, this too is something we will get through.Take care-Brenda |
by Ben Pickard
"Love is not about the good times" - Michael |
by Brenda
Ben, thank you so much! Yes, Michael did nail it on the head, love is the highest highs and the lowest lows and all mundane in between. I will keep him, even if he does kick, lol! Brenda |
by Em
Hi Brenda, |
by Brenda
Em, thanks so much-yeah, we both snore so it's always fun sleeping - between the happy feet and chain saws, lol. Aww, I remember the days when the little ones would climb in bed, they are sprawled out in the center and you are both hanging on to the edges for dear life. It's all love so it's all good. Take care, sleep well lol! |
Nothing is so delicious as self-directed irony. The image of you clinging to the edge of the bed is delightful. The bittersweet toleration of his nocturnal stampede for the sake of maintaining solidarity with the loved one comes across as less of a burden than you put it. In fact, it appears that with your ability to laugh at it, and yourself, you have a certain nostalgia building for the nightly race. |
by Brenda
Yes, it's true, lol! I call it his happy feet- you really have to laugh at situations and each other, life is too short to freak out over every little thing, even if I'm getting kicked in the shins.... |
Brenda lovely poem about the trials of your lovers feet. Oh how I can relate to that. If I don't get to sleep before mine it's impossible to get to sleep because he does the same and like you I end up knees hanging off the bed. Love the term mosh pot fray and the perfectly captured imagery in a light hearted way. Loved it Milly xx |
by Brenda
Aww thanks Milly! Really appreciate the kind words-I totally agree with you about getting to sleep first-otherwise it's game on-lol. I love him dearly, even if he's kicking the heck out of me. Thanks again! Brenda |
This made me smile so much - so true! when you love someone it's amazing what you put up with - including little wriggly beings! Lovely. |
by Brenda
Thank you so much! I laugh to think how many beings and critters can share a bed each night-humor is the only way to go with this. Take care-Brenda |
This is an adorable and unique poem, undoubtedly one-of-a-kind. The rhyming scheme was splendid, and your word use definitely makes this poem spring to life, even though it might be about a topic that many of us may not have experience with (me, in particular). |
by Brenda
Thank you so much! I definitely see what you are talking about with the punctuation. Sleeping with someone who has restless legs can sometimes be challenging, I've gotten pretty good at avoiding his kicks. |
Wow, cute little poem brenda. Rhymes perfectly. At some stage we all know what its like to sleep next to a wiggly worm in the bed. :) Well done ! |
by Brenda
Thank you! He makes sleep interesting, but I do love him dearly so we continue playing wiggle worm- lol. I appreciate your comments. |
Brenda a wonderful poem that I can absolutely relate to having a husband who has twitchy legs. A unique and funny approach with that bitter sweet fear of being alone at the end. Loved it. Milly xx |
by Brenda
Thank you so much Milly! Yeah, you gotta have a sense of humor when it comes to sleeping with your loved one, especially when they kick. Hugs-Brenda |
It is also hard to sleep when you are the one with restless legs. Sometimes my legs have a mind of their own. Walking for a good hour helps tire my legs out before bed. |
by Brenda
Jessica, I totally understand that. I too have my moments when my legs are doing the happy dance. Maybe my honey and I should go for a hike before we go to bed and be too tired to kick each other-thank you for the wonderful idea. |
by Adan7777
A wonderful poem that I can absolutely relate to |
by Brenda
Thank you, I'm finding a lot of are relating to this. I on occasion have happy feet myself. |
by Ren
Brenda, |
by Brenda
Ren, thank you so much, I really appreciate your comments. |
by Michael
I really like this write Brenda, not easy sleeping with ones restless antics. But love pushes through :) |
by Brenda
Michael, thank you so much! I do love my man so very much even when he's kicking the heck out of my shins, lol. |
by CJ Maleney
This really made me smile, and giggle a little. |
by Brenda
Thank you so much, I had to have some humor with this. |
by Mayday
Awwee, hehe. I love the rhyming pattern, Brenda! ^_^ |
by Brenda
Awww, thank you Mayday! I will forever try to snuggle him even when he's kicking me like crazy. |
by Dark Secrets
This made me laugh. It's sweet how positive this is. Reminds me of my late husband and his snoring. |
by Brenda
Thank you so much! You know its definitely love. We both snore like bears lol and kick each other ... |
by Zia Mikaela
This just made my day a lil brighter! Please keep writing! This is amazing! |
by Brenda
Thank you so much! |
by M.Useless
My first read of yours, and I can totally relate. At least his legs are dancing. Mine throw side kicks and roundhouses. ????. Great work, thank you. |
by Brenda
Thank you! There are times it gets pretty intense. Anyone who deals with this totally relate. |