Your final decision

Aww.. this is my favorite so far.. except for the last stanza.. i dont really think it fits.. you could just end it at "is your final decision"

You're really good.

seriously. better than me.

ttyl.
-Cassie

Wooow this is such a greta poem a good rhyming pattern also a good chose of words. i love the fact that it is filled with emotion and has come straight from your heart. you havent tried to make the words more complecated just kept it simple wich shows you really care and all this is true. i really loe this poem and hope to see more of your work loves ya always crimson-pain xxxxxxxx

so cute hehe i luv it when guys write poetry!! theres gotta be a lucky lady out there for you. bye honey,
luv dani xoxo

I enjoyed this poem a lot....lately I have been a fan of great love poems, as I have fallen victim to love myself, lol.

You did a wonderful job expressing your emotion...your love is as apparent as the stars in the sky.

Another fan of your work,

christa//no motiv?