Sweeeeet poem. Simple and cute.

Another heartfelt piece of poetry. Well written; nice choice of words and a good flow. Keep up the good work and take care.
Kind regards,
Kristina

great poem but the ending wasv off a little awwwwwwwwww but if u 2 ever brake up u no where 2 find me lol

OMG thats a sweet poem i can accross u on the discussion bord i hardly ever get comments ether i would really appreciate some but it dosnet matter ur in mi favourites just from that gr8 poem keep up the good work
luv rach

Another great poem you got here, no complaints from me =] It was absolutly beautiful. keep it up, another 5/5

cute poem!! very sweet!! keep it up!! :)

another great poem! 5/5!

wow so sweet and heartfelt totally awsome nice work

Lol, I already read this one too! But it was refreshing to read it again. Keep it up and take care.

Hey good job, but like I said in your other poem, try writing a few without rhymes, you might find it easier. Good job though!

awwww that was such a cute poem, i hope you 2 are happy 2gether, ur really talented, keep up the great work!!

another extremely personal and emotional poem, it seems.

but try not to force the rhyming, and experiment with more vividness and different styles... .. keep it up.

excellent stucture and flow, sweet poem

Well you really love this girl and it comes across in the poem.... I really don't know what else to say but i loved it... and i will check out the rest of your poems soon,lol i'm a little pressed for time right now but i promise i will

Hello !

Very Happy poem was this,i realy enjoyed the read,just something relaxing in the middle of sad things going around the world !

i Liked your style,i feel like it fits for a song ! a cool Love song : )

5/5
Peace
Rua Francis

Hello !

Very Happy poem was this,i realy enjoyed the read,just something relaxing in the middle of sad things going around the world !

i Liked your style,i feel like it fits for a song ! a cool Love song : )

5/5
Peace
Rua Francis

nice job! keep writing!

I enjoyed this poem a lot....lately I have been a fan of great love poems, as I have fallen victim to love myself, lol.

You did a wonderful job expressing your emotion...your love is as apparent as the stars in the sky.

Another fan of your work,

christa//no motiv?

so cute hehe i luv it when guys write poetry!! theres gotta be a lucky lady out there for you. bye honey,
luv dani xoxo

Wooow this is such a greta poem a good rhyming pattern also a good chose of words. i love the fact that it is filled with emotion and has come straight from your heart. you havent tried to make the words more complecated just kept it simple wich shows you really care and all this is true. i really loe this poem and hope to see more of your work loves ya always crimson-pain xxxxxxxx