by John Doe Mar 25, 2016
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I sat on the silent sand, |
by Lucifer
From Start till the end, I never felt disconnected. I think the last two lines says you will live as a ghost for the rest of the time. |
by John Doe
Thank you so much Lucifer for taking the time to read my work and appreciating it. |
by mossgirl19
Beautiful imagery for such a very deep poem. You are a truly talented writer. This is excellent. |
by Em
I have many words to say but they just won't come as the beauty and depth of this poem has captivated every ounce of my being. |
Such beauty and depth to this poem - have read it three times now and still I see something new |
by Brenda
So deep, so beautiful |
by John Doe
Thank you! |