So deep, so beautiful

Such beauty and depth to this poem - have read it three times now and still I see something new

I have many words to say but they just won't come as the beauty and depth of this poem has captivated every ounce of my being.
I love the last 4 lines

Beautiful imagery for such a very deep poem. You are a truly talented writer. This is excellent.

From Start till the end, I never felt disconnected. I think the last two lines says you will live as a ghost for the rest of the time.
Powerful write, mihir.