Very deep filled with a lot of emotion it Definitely draw in your reader into what the person is going through Very good 5/5 keep up the great work, but also you might want to fix one of your words ( The bottle beside me is calling me name) I think you meant to say "my" name but other then that its still a great read :) |
by Allie
Thank you, I didn't even see that. |
by Em
Allie, |