Comments : A Hot Patch

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    This is excellent work. I have read it again couple of times and your words meander like a cloud lost in a labyrinth. The mystery is enjoying the riddle.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by DarkLight

    It took me ten minutes trying so hard to come up with a comment to this poem, and still nothing.
    From the title, choice of words and the flow is such a breathe taking to read not once not twice but a number.
    There nothing I could say to describe the feeling, the enticement from your poem.