by Mr. Darcy
Hello Darren, |
by Darren
Thanks Micheal |
by Ben Pickard
Darren |
by Darren
Thanks Ben |
Truly mesmerising. I loved every word and image that this poem conjured. The idea of voices tearing at your ears and ideas. Daydreams arriving via unicorn. stepping into a daydream as if it were simply through a window. The feelings of calmness found in sitting by a shimmering lake. Still water I always find calming. |
by Darren
Thanks Milly, |
by Darren
Thanks again to Ben, I have removed all trace of the word 'and'. I think this has improved this piece and it is quite rare I edit anything. Maybe I should do this more. |
by Em
Hi Darren, |
by Darren
Thanks Em, |
by Brenda
Darren, awesome write! Congratulations on your win! |
by Darren
Thanks Brenda |
by Maple Tree
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