So beautiful, so sad. I really like the line of feeling like crying after strangers have touched you. You have done a wonderful write on one night stands and how incredibly lonely they really are.

Firstly I'd like to say that you write about the subject well and i feel from a truthful point of view. You write open and honestly with raw emotion.

For a poet,
the morning after pill
after a one night stand
is always a poem
about feeling hollow
^^
This opening stanza grabs the readers attention and I feel that the use of 'hollow' is a real deep and powerful way to explain using this.

I left your house full
of silence, you said I had
no problem talking
the night before
^^
The contrast here is amazing and goes to show that you didn't want to get caught.

the tram had passed
about five stops already,
I was
thinking about how
I possibly need
to see a therapist
^^
You 'thinking about how I possibly need to see a therapist' shows hat this happened be wise there are problems going on.

...because I always feel
like crying after strangers
touch me,
^^
This is the saddest stanza because you let it happen but do not like it as everybody else. It's like what you craved but do not want..

because as a poet,
the morning after pill
after a one night stand
is always a poem
about feeling hollow
^^
The repetition here to me shadows the depression like feeling.

Em