Comments : The Losing

  • 9 years ago

    by hiraeth

    Caught a typo, 'brakes' should be 'breaks', other then that. Lovely poem. Welcome to P&Q.

    • 9 years ago

      by Lyn Aribaca

      Sorry . but I know the difference of the two.
      just a typo . by the way thank you .

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Such a nice little poem.. Should I stay or go kind of thing. Heart says yes, head says no or vice versa.

    Em

    • 9 years ago

      by Lyn Aribaca

      Poem from my heart.

      thanks a lot, Em.

  • 9 years ago

    by J Young

    Nice job. Short, But says a lot.

  • 3 months ago

    by Simon Bessey

    I have to start at the start right. Here's it's getting to know you. Emotional journey expressed. I'm in the car Lyn....