hey man nice poem!!! im glad you found another girl..... u dont deserve to be treated like that!

Hey Chris. Wonderful poem. Very well written and full of heartfelt emotions. You did such a good job in transferring your emotions into a poem. Keep up the good work and take care!
Kind regards,
Kristina

wow chris great poem. Defintaly one of your best. Your work is great never stop writing. Im glad you have your new girlfriend in your life. You deserve so much better than that ex.

This was a great poem...I hope things stay looking up for you...Good job with this poem. much lve JJ

Awesome poem! Sucks to be in situations like that, but I am glad that everything is better for you, that is good news!! Keep it up and take care

Wow... that was awesome! I absolutly LOVED the ending, it was definatly the best part. Good job, and keep it up! 5/5

great poem!! i know how you feel!! keep it up!! :)

Lol, I already read this one(actually I was the last one to comment), But I still love reading it. Keep it up!

Great job I have beeb there Glad to hear all is well now! Check out some of my poems if u would please! Thanx

that's is awesome... really well written straight to the point and very heart felt, great job. lots of emotion in it

Wow... Awesome poem. I really liked the "but I pardoned your crime" line. It was a clever way to explain what you meant. Good job, keep it up.

I hope to read more of your poetry when I'm not 1/2 asleep, lol ;) Until then, good luck!
-Kate

i loved the feeling you get going right from the start of the poem, it's very angry, yet very loving...nice job! keep it up!

wow! what a great poem...I love, love, LOVE the ending [pills]...I also enjoyed the metaphoric value in comparing yourself to a toy; How often humans feel twisted and used...

Awww babes it's wonderful:D But it made me cry cuz i know exactly how that is:( But it's a GREAT poem.. I love things that make me cry:D Maybe that's why i loved the guy it reminded me of so much:( Meh... Oh well.... Keep up the good work sweets and RESPECT THE PENGUIN! Sorry i had to throw that in babes... *hugs* Take care and keep writing:D

~Jessica

AWWW THAT STUPID B!TC#...sorry im in aealy bad mood right now i lve the poem....its really good...ttyl

----mallory

Ahh chris, u continue to amaze me
consider yourself lucky, u are now on my favorite list

i loved this poem. i must admit i have found myself in similar situations before. it goes smoothly, and has a lot of emotion

Ruby

I love this poem
its beauitful
& touching & reminds me of my life
pls read "murder or suicide"
leave a comment will mean a lot
gave u 5/5
love
amy

Wow thats amazing....

did this really happen?
i hope not...but from what i know uve got a wonderful friendship transformed into an even more wonderful relationship
and THATS GREAT!!!!!!!!
BE HAPPY!!

You're awesome AND a good writer. cool. send me a message sometime. we can talk again. alright ttyl
-cassie

Dis was good....
im sori u were hurt lyk this...it happened to me as well..it bought me dwn so much n it still has but after reading this it gave me hope so thanks :D.....keep up yr work, u got talent...love dia mwaz xoxo