I Dont know....

by Nikhil Devanikar   Mar 30, 2016


I don't know what's happening to me now a days,
I don't know if I miss you or not
I don't know if I still love you or not
I don't know if I can go on or not

My confidant says the feelings are temporary
and that they will go away soon, but m not sure,
It's been a long time since you left,
And the feelings haven't stopped since,
But then again, I don't know what's happening to me now a days,
I don't know if I miss you or not,
I don't know if I still love you or not,
I don't know if I can go on or not,

All I know is now a days most of the nights feel colder,
I know that your name is still painful to hear or say,
I know that your face is still hurtful to see,
I know that I miss your smile,
I know that I long for the feeling I got when near you

All of this is contradicting, but all of this has led me to melancholy
Hence in the end I still don't know what's happening to me now a days
And I don't know what I should do.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Nikhil Devanikar

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  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    This is a great poem. Many people can relate to. It flows well and is a mix of emotions like anyone's would be when a relationship ends.
    Good piece.
    I think the first line on the second stanza would read better as 'my confidence says the feelings are temporary'
    On the second line of this stanza you write 'and that, they will go away soon, but m not sure' I think you meant to put "I'm" there.

    On the third line in the second stanza you wrote 'its been a long sine you left' I think you should have written 'its been a long time since you left'

    I so like the contradiction within the piece as it shows the body and minds state of confusion when someone leaves etc.. Well done

    • 9 years ago

      by Nikhil Devanikar

      Hi,
      regarding the second stanza i wrote "confidant" as in the one person who you tell everything that happens in this phase. the second line is a continuation of the first line.

      Regarding the third line it was a typing mistake, i meant to write what you said.

      Thanks for pointing these things to me will be careful next time.

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