How come nobody has commented on this? |
by Maher
Thank you sir and many thanks for taking the time to comment, and also for your compliments - much of which are far beyond me. I will read some of yours now while it's still early here :) |
by Em
Maher, |
by Maher
Thanks Em. I don't mind it being missed, as long as someone enjoys it somewhere down the line, it's enough for me :) |
by Everlasting
I wonder if you used meter on purpose or if you used it just by following the sound? |
by Maher
Thank you for giving it a read :) It was definitely on purpose. I tried to make it almost like a military march, but one sided. I didn't get it completely right, but that'll hopefully come with practice. |
by Everlasting
Hmm As weird as it may sound but I'm not that familiar with military March... Eek |
by Maher
Haha it's not a poetic technique, I meant to the rhythm of a literal military march. To the beat of the snare and in a nearly emotionless robotic flow. I thought it would add more coldness to the humans vs nature theme (for the human side). |
by Everlasting
Huh, pardon? Where is the nearly emotionless robotic flow. Haha I feel so much emotion there. |
by Maher
Haha good to know I'm not in the boat alone then. Thanks again ma'am, will do :) |