Hello Triston and welcome to the site.

A neat little first post from you here. These dreams sound more like nightmares! I have had those 'endless nights' that dreams seem to revel in and they really aren't much fun, are they?

Congratulations on your first post and I look forward to reading more of your work.
All the very best
Ben

Good first write.
Enjoyed reading it.

Well wriiten poem, great imagery and emotion. It's really nice when you find a short poem so obviously well thought out and with rhyme. Welcome to P&Q it's a great place to be. I've only been a member for a short time but found everyone to be friendly and inspiring. Take care and well done on your first submission. All best Milly

I like this poem it was well written as your first piece.
It was wonderful

Hey Triston,

A haunting poetry for your first post.
Welcome to PnQ. Hope to read more of your poems and quotes.

xxx

Your a good poet keep writing more

Triston,

This is a good first poem. Welcome to p&q. I hope you continue to write and share your unique style with us.

Em

Thank you all for your kind comments

They have been very uplifting

Hello Triston,

I like the form and rhyme of this poem. It's theme though dark is presented well. Dark poetry is a theme many can relate to. I encourage you to write more and share your feelings.

Take care,

Michael